My first production - need some feeback

[thito21]

Hi friends,

This is my first track, I appreciate any feedback so much!

I'm brazilian and here there aren't many deep house producers, so I don't have anybody to exchange Knowledge.

*Sorry for my poor english


http://rapidshare.com/files/189670962/Thito_Fabres_-_The_Beginning__Incomplete_Version_.mp3

Thito Fabres
www.myspace.com/thitofabres

[smok]

Sounds quite good but like migumartinez said about my latest track, there is something missing... Somehow also those two synth sounds didn't really blend in together very well. Sounded like there were a bit dissonance between them or something like that. But go ahead, keep on working with it!

[thito21]

very thanks for reply dj smok.

I decided to use 2 synths because I have some difficulties in track progression.

[migumartinez]

at the beginning of the track it seems like something is wrong with the bass.
i think the track is to long if you arrangement like this. needs a dramatic break and build up.

keep it coming!
migu