A lil house track, recorded live

[Barfunkel]

Here's a little house jam I did last week. This is a live take, with a drum machine and synthesizers running, the computer is only adding a bit of EQ and compression on a few channels.

http://soundcloud.com/user4904810/paivan-ulosanti

How should I improve it, before I make a final version? Both musical and production tips are welcome.

[the crackhouse]

Here's a little house jam I did last week. This is a live take, with a drum machine and synthesizers running, the computer is only adding a bit of EQ and compression on a few channels.

http://soundcloud.com/user4904810/paivan-ulosanti

How should I improve it, before I make a final version? Both musical and production tips are welcome.

I say the overall is good and haunting, but you may want to keep some sounds up and others down to create some edge, somewhere. It's good but not hypnotic enough to me, so you should give it some breaks or new sounds that escape the mass(ive).

Edit: I've listenned briefly to all your soundcloud tunes and just look at your waveforms: no breaks! Hypnotic should mean progressive, but you're not yet into it.

Idance

[Barfunkel]

Breaks (and generally more variance) are incoming, when I record real versions of those. They are all recorded live (live in as in sequenced from my Monomachine and turning knobs while the loop plays) from the synthesizers and my Jomox and due to some computer problems that's the only way I can do it right now, no overdubbing, just 8 channels of live recording. I'm a bit too busy to keep everything in check even there, creating a good breakdown in the middle of all that is difficult.

Hopefully I'll sort my computer problems soon enough, I'm itching to do some finetuning.

[Ashwell]

Looks like you'll have plenty of good material to work with once you have a better computer. I like the sound.

Sounds like you have some nice gear too.