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jah
02-09-2011, 04:05 AM
http://soundcloud.com/jhambero

would greatly appreciate any constructive feedback!

DJ Keith Porter
03-22-2011, 11:57 AM
Jehan_Throwback

Nice loop with flang effect. Needs to be develop in a full mash, edit or whatever you make it.

Groove Theory - Tell Me (Jehans Tell all edit)

I am a push over for R&B remixes.
I love Groove Theory and I'm wondering where I can get that accapella but thats another subject.

Sounds a little fast but It can work.
Nice drum track but it needs a little more movement that flows with the vocals in the track.
Try to make the drum track and the edited hooks, verses and chor fit together as one song (remix) by breaking up the edits into the track.

If this can be done you'll have a nice remix there.

JMHO.

jah
06-02-2011, 07:40 AM
cool, I appreciate you taking the time to listen and critique!
all duly noted and I feel the same! thankyou!

Shannon
06-09-2011, 09:08 PM
I like the first tune. I think you can make the transitions faster but other than that it's nice. Great work.

jah
11-28-2011, 09:39 AM
I like the first tune. I think you can make the transitions faster but other than that it's nice. Great work.

cool, thank you. Appreciate you listening...

all the best,
j.