Need feedback for my track please

[kav]

Hi all

If any of you have a moment to spare, i would really appreciate any feedback and advice on my track in terms of production quality.

Link to my track - http://soundcloud.com/mrkavalicious/mr-kavalicious-another-1

I am not concerned if you like the track/arrangement/etc. But i seriously need help, feedback & advice in terms of my production quality and execution in terms of the general mix.

PS: I make tracks as a hobby but only recently have started taking it more seriously, so im still learning

Thanks

[blackwax]

for me the open hat sound is too high its almost overpowering everything else

[rich carrick]

ditto that - it could also be a tiny little bit tighter ie less decay