new deep vocal house track 120bpm - feedback please!

[rich carrick]

Hi guys, my latest work - would really appreciate some feedback about sounds and arrangement, will get it mastered by someone who knows what they are doing:biggrin:

http://soundcloud.com/rick-leonard/this-little-heart

thanks a lot

rich

[kav]

Yo Sup Rich, just gave this song a good few listens at a pretty high volume

I think the arrangement is pretty cool, all the sounds and instruments that came into effect throughout the song worked well. I didnt get bored, so thats a good thing

To me it seems like your on the right track here. I think it would sound better if you worked on the vocal part of the song around the 2 min part. "you dont know what to do", i think this vocal section could do with some work in terms of the delay effect your using, i feel there is too much delay when there doesnt need to be and maybe the delay effect comes in too early. But thats just me.

[rich carrick]

thanks for listening kav!

yeah in retrospect I was thinking the exact same thing - TBH I think some of the automation failed to export with the bounce so I'll try again

thanks though, glad you like it........

**EDIT** Ok I re-exported the track & it's sounding like I want it to re: vocals - hope it sounds better now ;-)

thanks for listening!