thanks bro....i will take that advice and use it...
I took a listen to it, nice work there.
It's got that jacking feel which is up my street. I think you made a good dub with it. Something I'd play before slamming into the vocal piece as a teaser.
If I could take the liberty of making a suggestion, cut the duration down to 6mins and use more snippets from the original vocal then you've nailed it hard.
Keep up the good work.