Back to peace and LOVE

**(Im)poster** · 03-30-2003, 09:17 AM

Go away for a few days...

I have been pondering GF's recent post and the related discussion. I decided to base this Sunday's verse to that topic.

ACCEPTABLE ADDICTIONS

I love you!
All of you who need
this music like I do
When we dance
fortuitous circumstance
creates moods enhanced
Getting so high,
entranced
by the moment

I love you
The things you say
I sense some way
we've connected
you hear my words
understand my tears
so I remain here,
despite my fears,
at the moment

I love you!
You make me laugh
my brain adores
your beauty
and I'll feel free
if you love me
Romantic reciprocity
breeds the serenity
of the moment

And I love you
on a midnight ride
with you inside
I'm rapt
Wrapped
in your arms
a transcendental space
the biochemical embrace
to erase all pain
I'm intoxicated,
aggreably insane
for the moment

[ March 30, 2003, 10:27 AM: Message edited by: (Im)poster ]

**(Im)poster** · 03-30-2003, 09:25 AM

All poetic responses appreciated.

f0reverneverm0re · 03-30-2003, 12:14 PM

i don't mean to be mean
but you need Listerine®,
not a sip,
not a swallow,
but the whole damn bottle!

[img]graemlins/all_coholic.gif[/img]

**DOTSmusic** · 03-30-2003, 12:43 PM

Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
i don't mean to be mean
but you need Listerine®,
not a sip,
not a swallow,
but the whole damn bottle!

[img]graemlins/all_coholic.gif[/img]

i'm tellin you, DHP is filled with some of the wittiest mofo's on the net.

**DOTSmusic** · 03-30-2003, 03:08 PM

i reread the poem and i really like it.
sounds very personal though which can be so dangerous on a public forum.

i was writing a lot of song lyrics last year when i was playing bass, singing, and playing both acoustic and electric guitar in a rock and roll band.
when we broke up i and just kinda stopped writing.
i was too caught up with writing music for this electronic outfit i joined right after the previous band.
i didn't sing in that one so i didn't feel the need to write lyrics, ya know?

last week i decide to write some poetry outside of song lyrics for the 1st time since i was in my mid teens.

here's one i wrote while bored at work.

it's more on the Freaky Friday tip but here it is.

(poem removed,and replaced in your pm's)

i know it's kinda on the cheezy tip.
i have never written anything even vaguely erotic in my entire life and wanted to see if i could do it.

[ March 30, 2003, 06:55 PM: Message edited by: aKiLa ]

**Friday** · 03-31-2003, 01:46 PM

I am so glad you enjoyed my post by krishnamurti, I do hope others read it...if not, oh well...

Concerning your poem which I do like, I just wanted to point out, addiction is never love...either for yourself or someone else.

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

**DOTSmusic** · 03-31-2003, 03:04 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by girlfriday:

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

Blush,

Blush

**Friday** · 03-31-2003, 04:15 PM

[quote]Originally posted by aKiLa:

Originally posted by girlfriday:

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

Blush, Blush

[img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img] Blush?!?

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 07:18 PM

Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
i don't mean to be mean
but you need Listerine®,
not a sip,
not a swallow,
but the whole damn bottle!

[img]graemlins/all_coholic.gif[/img]

Anybody got a little smilie that does a backhand slap? You better be good, FNM. I'm one of the few people who doesn't hate you... :D

f0reverneverm0re · 03-31-2003, 07:31 PM

Originally posted by (Umm)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
i don't mean to be mean
but you need Listerine®,
not a sip,
not a swallow,
but the whole damn bottle!

[img]graemlins/all_coholic.gif[/img]

got a little backhand slap You better be good, FNM. I'm one of the people who hate you... :D [/QUOTE]thanks for saying it with a smile

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 07:36 PM

Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by (Umm)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
i don't mean to be mean
but you need Listerine®,
not a sip,
not a swallow,
but the whole damn bottle!

[img]graemlins/all_coholic.gif[/img]

got a little backhand slap You better be good, FNM. I'm one of the people who hate you... :D [/QUOTE]thanks for saying it with a smile [/QUOTE]hate = love. You're in my prayers, dear. Hope you're feeling better.

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 07:43 PM

Originally posted by girlfriday:
I am so glad you enjoyed my post by krishnamurti, I do hope others read it...if not, oh well...

Concerning your poem which I do like, I just wanted to point out, addiction is never love...either for yourself or someone else.

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

Yes, I really gave it a lot of thought because some parts of it hit home. It was interesting to me how each person who posted seemed to focus on a different aspect of the writing. I think we see what we need to see at the time.

Oh, and do you read Mojo? ;) I have never seen AKiLa before, but I bet he smells really good and his spirit is beautiful...

f0reverneverm0re · 03-31-2003, 07:53 PM

Originally posted by (Im)poster:
hate = love. You're in my prayers, dear. Hope you're feeling better.

"Save your pity for the *weak*!!" -- Shang Tsung from the movie Mortal Kombat (Cary Hiroyuki Tagawa)

**DOTSmusic** · 03-31-2003, 08:15 PM

Originally posted by (Im)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by girlfriday:
I am so glad you enjoyed my post by krishnamurti, I do hope others read it...if not, oh well...

Concerning your poem which I do like, I just wanted to point out, addiction is never love...either for yourself or someone else.

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

Yes, I really gave it a lot of thought because some parts of it hit home. It was interesting to me how each person who posted seemed to focus on a different aspect of the writing. I think we see what we need to see at the time.

Oh, and do you read Mojo? ;) I have never seen AKiLa before, but I bet he smells really good and his spirit is beautiful... [/QUOTE]i don't look half bad either. [img]graemlins/acclaim.gif[/img]

i will never live that Mojo thing down huh? [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

beautiful spirit? hmmmmm!!!!!!
some have told me i was beautiful, though for some reason i just can't see the reasons why for them saying so.
but then again they also scolded me for not seeing it their way.
but as they say, we are all our own worst critics.

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 08:17 PM

Originally posted by aKiLa:
i reread the poem and i really like it.
sounds very personal though which can be so dangerous on a public forum.

Not so dangerous. The poem is about me and I'm not uncomfortable with it. I was not intending to be erotic, only to make a point about what "love" has meant to me thus far.

Actually, I am pleased that you started up again. I don't consider myself a poet by any stretch. I just like to put words together and had hoped that others would do the same. (Thanks, JMNYC)

Actually, I think FNM has a gift (contribution to the present thread notwithstanding) and his work inspired me to start writing again.

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 08:24 PM

Originally posted by aKiLa:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by (Im)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by girlfriday:
I am so glad you enjoyed my post by krishnamurti, I do hope others read it...if not, oh well...

Concerning your poem which I do like, I just wanted to point out, addiction is never love...either for yourself or someone else.

Also, akila, I read your poem on the weekend (before your edit)...very sexy ;)

Yes, I really gave it a lot of thought because some parts of it hit home. It was interesting to me how each person who posted seemed to focus on a different aspect of the writing. I think we see what we need to see at the time.

Oh, and do you read Mojo? ;) I have never seen AKiLa before, but I bet he smells really good and his spirit is beautiful... [/QUOTE]i don't look half bad either. [img]graemlins/acclaim.gif[/img]

i will never live that Mojo thing down huh? [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

beautiful spirit? hmmmmm!!!!!!
some have told me i was beautiful, though for some reason i just can't see the reasons why for them saying so.
but then again they also scolded me for not seeing it their way.
but as they say, we are all our own worst critics. [/QUOTE]Well, I figure you're too young for me, and GF also has a beautiful spirit and I'm sure her record collection is better than mine... :D

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 08:28 PM

Originally posted by f0reverneverm0re:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by (Im)poster:
hate = love. You're in my prayers, dear. Hope you're feeling better.

"Save your pity for the *weak*!!" -- Shang Tsung from the movie Mortal Kombat (Cary Hiroyuki Tagawa)
[/QUOTE]I don't pity you in the least. You're who you want to be. I'm happy to hear from you, though. I'd kiss you, but I hate the smell of liquor.

**DOTSmusic** · 03-31-2003, 08:32 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by (Im)poster:
Well, I figure you're too young for me, and GF also has a beautiful spirit and I'm sure her record collection is better than mine... :D look at you, trying to play matchmaker. [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

[ March 31, 2003, 09:07 PM: Message edited by: aKiLa ]

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 09:02 PM

[quote]Originally posted by aKiLa:

look at you, trying to play matchmaker. [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

OH, but who started it? Bet you don't remember that one, huh?

**DOTSmusic** · 03-31-2003, 09:05 PM

Originally posted by (Im)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by aKiLa:

look at you, trying to play matchmaker. [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

OH, but who started it? Bet you don't remember that one, huh?

[img]graemlins/tongueout.gif[/img] i didn't think you remembered

[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img]

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 09:14 PM

Originally posted by aKiLa:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by (Im)poster:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by aKiLa:

look at you, trying to play matchmaker. [img]graemlins/rofl.gif[/img]

OH, but who started it? Bet you don't remember that one, huh?

[img]graemlins/tongueout.gif[/img] i didn't think you remembered

[img]graemlins/lol.gif[/img] [/QUOTE]Come now, I remember most everything I read on DHP. And if I forget, there's always the search... :D

**Friday** · 03-31-2003, 10:19 PM

Imposter and Akila you both are funny,

s for each one of you.

Mojo? hmmmm... I may have to do my own search ;)

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 10:37 PM

You posted in that thread. But to refresh your memory...

You might be AKiLa's [img]biggrinangel.gif[/img]

:D

**Friday** · 03-31-2003, 11:09 PM

Originally posted by (Im)poster:
You posted in that thread. But to refresh your memory...

You might be AKiLa's [img]biggrinangel.gif[/img]

:D

Oh yeah

I forgot about that....oops..... ok, what's MOJO.

**(Im)poster** · 03-31-2003, 11:15 PM

Originally posted by girlfriday:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by (Im)poster:
You posted in that thread. But to refresh your memory...

You might be AKiLa's [img]biggrinangel.gif[/img]

:D

Oh yeah I forgot about that....oops..... ok, what's MOJO. [/QUOTE]A music magazine from the UK. Pretend like you knew that. ;)

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