Any legal experts on board? Re: music contracts

[Slyde]

Posted a rough draft of a songwriter collaboration contract in the producer's section, but thought I'd mention it here too in case there's any experts around...would you mind taking a look at it and making some suggestions? I took bits and pieces from a few different ones I found to make it useful for broke producers who want to convince musicians to play on their beats without having a lot of cash for them upfront...the idea is that the producer would keep most of the rights and control of the finished product, but the contributing musician(s) would be guaranteed a certain percentage of all future profits...looking to make it as simple as possible but cover everybody...will post the final version for all to use after I run it by as many people as possible...thanks for your help

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