Production-comments, tips

[Dj Taga]

HI TO ALL!!!!
I have created this thread so we can share experiences in music production

So for begin, please hear some of my tracks and give me some comments and useful advices... thanks
Listen and enjoy

http://soundcloud.com/tagakg93/dj-ta...y-original-mix
http://soundcloud.com/tagakg93/dj-ta...right-original
http://soundcloud.com/tagakg93/dj-ta...ng-trough-that

I hope that you like them!

[blackwax]

what equipment are you using?

[Dj Taga]

Im useing Fl Studio 10

[blackwax]

soundcard?
PC/MAC?
Plug ins?
Controllers?
Hardware?

:-)

[Damian_S]

1st Track - Sounds ok. Kick is a little boomy (maybe some EQing required in the mid-bass area of the kick) but otherwise the beat and bassline is a solid enough groove. Overall it doesnt do much though. It has good potential but needs a few other elements.

2nd Track - Prefer this to the first. The sounds youve used for the chord is a tiny bit bland. I suggest playing the same notes using a piano like sound and overlaying it with the existing chord. Give the sound more texture. The clap / snare sound doesnt sit quite right with the beat. Note sure what it is, it sounds like it could be playing a tough late. Otherwise good work, but as in the first track you could have added a few other elements that would have made it even better.

3rd Track - The best of the 3 in my opinion. Sounds solid and I especially like the section from 0:45 to 1:45. The small part from 1:49 to 2:17 doesnt add any value, you should take that out. Otherwise It would have been nice to have gone back to the 1st excellent section and some point further on but instead it kind of moves away from this, going slightly more minimal then finishes.

Overall good solid sounding tunes. You should look at adding one or 2 other elements and progressing the tracks to keep them interesting, rather than just sticking with the same idea all the way through. Please take that as constructive critism. The tracks are good but I feel you could make them even better.